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Publicata de: karateka in Nebune

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Revin….surprins de existenta…
Sa scriu …de dragoste in esenta…
Diform …in noptile pierdute …
Pictez.…iubirile tacute…
Astept…o raza de speranta…
Privesc…spre florile din glastra…
Durerea…sper sa o stopez…
Iubirea…sa o regasesc…
Sa o cinstesc…

Data publicare: 26/02/2010 | Vizualizari: 2832

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Moon srcutk again! This time a great srcutk with 3 components of question, resolution and journey. The never ending question with no resolution and the desire to want more and more (humans are never satisfied with what they have)and at the end of the day it leads to a long journey well, I assume a journey of life which is still way far from humans reach (the desired destination) to get wholly the satisfactions they look for. :)That's how I look at it. The poet knows best, the readers make assumptions or giving some critical appreciations. Love it! Keep going, man! :)

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